WOW!! What a lengthy, detailed and enjoyable entry!  Lucky sure seems to have a lot more expressions than my squabitt.  But mine doesn't get involved in all the interesting predicaments that B seems to.  Great ending paragraph!

Hmmmm...started out with a bit of trepidation but ended well!  Another wonderful entry.

lilyr wrote:

Another wonderful entry!  At least Leodici didn't make the diving helmet!  Was Greg wearing his chain mail when B pushed him in?  I'm really loving this!  BTW -- Would you prefer that we not put comments in?  So as not to disrupt the flow?

Does Greg ever take off his chain mail?  

I don't mind the comments.  I've saved everything to a word processing document so that I can refer back to it if I need to.
 

WendyDarling wrote:

You have such a great imagination, Tirama.  Not only can you dream up a much better story than the game actually has, you can come up with several stories.  I would hire you in a heartbeat.

Absolutely!  

I'd never thought about how the economy works (ie paychecks).  I can see a barter economy for a lot of the people/stuff -- maybe even the soldiers.  They protect, the people house and clothe them.

I love that B is so enthusiastic about the house.