B deserves flowers for all her work!  Is it just me or is Raphael more of a con artisit than an inspired and self-centered artisit?

awwww...and Berengaria was just doing her job!

Well, well, well.  Are the windows getting steamy? 

You are so good at this.  You could show this to anybody and get a writing job.  Maybe even a book deal.  I'm playing the same game, but the characters and story mean nothing to me.  Then I come read this and I'm ablolutely entranced.  Everybody just comes alive.  And you're writing just for us.   I feel like Elvis is performing at my private birthday party.  This story feels like a present.  Thank you for the gift

"No.  It's waited too long already."   I'm swooning.  If I was at home, even though I've never done it, I think I'd make my husband act this out in the bedroom

They sure are moving!